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… a leettle bit more left hand, and “Moon of Memory” can be put in the can.

Then, on to either “Bitter Clean” or this oddball mixo thing that’s bubbled up from who knows where. The Mixolydian Dimension. *orchestra hit* A desolate universe of flat sevenths and major triads …

Update: I need another couple measures in “Memory.” I think I’ve hit one of those Frankenstein situations where I’m slapping two sections together inelegantly, and I need to pry them apart and work some putty in the join instead of just stitching them together with no transition. It sounds like a clunky gear shift currently. That needs to get fixed.

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